Walk Afar
Leave the reeds in the flowing stream
Swaying to the harmony
Should I leave the floating lilies too
Should I turn and walk afar?
Used to sit amongst the willows
In a place where I belonged
Should I leave the noveltly in the air
Should I turn and walk afar?
With the singing bluebirds above
And the glinting dew on leaves
Should I leave the moist grass behind
Should I turn and walk afar?
Where the rays embrace the valleys
Where the marigolds grow in bliss
Should I leave the soaring ravens?
Should I turn and walk afar?
Hidhaya(c) 7th May 2007 15.12
May 7, 2007 at 11:05 am
i cudnt quite get wat u meant the first time i read it..but the second time was the charm..has real deep meanin in it..really nicely written..well done..u never cease to amaze me..trust me..u can do wonders to the english language..keep up the good work kiddo!!hehe
May 7, 2007 at 12:56 pm
Simple and nice
May 7, 2007 at 5:12 pm
wow..awesome…you shud really consider doin an englit course at some point in uni u know…really helpful when writing…imagine how good u’d be then…heheh…just a though…
May 8, 2007 at 9:20 pm
nice n simple … yet gud poetry..:) keep writin
May 8, 2007 at 10:57 pm
Its very nice. I actually racked my brain to find out what u were trying to say. Maybe i think too much.
Please do post more of your poetry.When u feel like it. (start feeling like it more often!)
Also ignore anvalisse’s comment about englit courses. To write beautiful poetry, u need to live life freely and beautifully, not learn to write better poetry. And thats the whole point, isnt it?
May 27, 2007 at 7:14 pm
Niiice… Very meaninful… Ur a true poet!
June 18, 2007 at 6:59 am
Hey, no new posts?
July 1, 2007 at 8:26 am
wow..u R pretty gud in english
haha..keep it up.wantin to read more
July 24, 2007 at 7:22 am
nice! keep ‘em coming..!